Wednesday 29 March 2017

Foggy Day

Room 14 were excited by all the fog.  We wrote some Moments in Time to try to describe what we heard, saw, felt and wondered.


Foggy Day by Srishti
I heard the bell.
I saw white clouds.
I felt cold.
I wondered if I can go to sleep

Foggy Day by Luis
I heard a lawnmower
I saw green grass
I felt nothing
I wondered if I could go home.

Foggy Day by James
I heard shouting when people were playing scary games.
I saw nothing.
I felt cold.
I wondered if my brothers played hide and seek.

Foggy Day by Dylan
I heard a lawnmower.
I saw the wind is blowing the clouds.
I felt cold.
I wondered if I could go to sleep.

Foggy Day by Zoe
I heard drip, drip, drip.
I saw Sammy the clock, he has a light after school.
I felt cold.
I wondered when the fog would go away.


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